I really enjoyed the animation, and the art style was clean and fun. I would say you continue to use SAI in your work, it gives a great look to your piece. I didn't, however, find this animation interesting. I think maybe you could punch up the humor factor or perhaps go with an entirely different plot altogether. Once again, the artwork is beautiful, but the overall plot and interest factor for me was low on this one.....
Well I'm just happy you enjoyed the animation.
I couldn't exactly do much with the plot though, as I was commissioned to do this story. So I'm not really to concerned if people like it or not.
But thanks anyways.
I'm a sketchbook fiend who loves watching animation, and producing animations. I really enjoy RPG's and fighting games, and I hope to meet fellow artists here at Newgrounds.
Age 33, Male
Gamer/Artist
United States
Joined on 10/6/12
The Fox and Wolf 
